Hey darl a touching piece. very well written. thank u for the comment on my poem meant alot xx

Great poem! Love it!
xoxo

Very nicely said

This was beautiful

I must say, it's really good. But remember, if you use the same word over and over again, it'll become a bore, and not to mention, sound weird. But I also liked the other word choice you used. Maybe, try next time, to make the flow a little more smoother.

I have nothing else to say other than that.

=] Great jobb. 4/5