Comments : Holding her

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was so sad! very well written but so sad!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I agree with William, the down voters are just jealous which is why they do it.
    You really had an indepth message in this and you really showed the love in it as well..
    Excellent piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very sad poem. Good job on the writing.