"Swallowing away her ability to think
To feel and know what is real"

Very strong words. Excellent!
Do any of us know what is real though? There's a thought for you.
Briliant poem, good title too.
Keep it up
5/5
*Gem*

How do I know so much at 13? I think I need to ask myself that lol to be honest I have no idea. Thanx for everyones comments. Much appreciated = ]

Wow, I loved it. Keep writing, you obviously have talent.

You are such a great writer, keep up the good work, Swallowing away her ability to think. To feel and know what is real, I love that line and thanks for the comment!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

You are wise way beyond your years. Jeez. I love the title. It's just great. Love your talent!!

Wow... this poem is filled with really great emotion... the flow was good and it was an enjoyale read...

i didnt like when you spoke of blood dripping from your dry lips.. the whole poem you used such beautiful but painful ways to describe your feelings and then talking about blood is just very elementry and doesnt fit in this poem... in some poems its good.. i myself have poems with talk of it, however, this poem is more advanced than that... also in the last line... i think the perfect touch would be taking out god damn... the line is strong in itself and god damn seems unnecessary to me :D

I enjoyed your poetry very much. your writing reflects that of someone much older and wiser than your age may indicate. I hope to read more from you in the future.