I liked this.
The whole poem held aq note of warning which is not surprising when you read the words, which are very powerful.
Excellent title too.
5/5
*Gem*

Aww.. this is a really cute poem.. i like it a lot.. and thanks for the comment on my poem

WOAH.

that's amazing and i love every part of it. my favorite of yours..
congrats.

-Parker

Very well written i liked your style and the sence of warning