Awww.. this is very touching here. i can realte to this too. i look back n try to remember what life really was. with the smiles n true laughs. this part is my favorite.

I remember days before this
Where I used to smile and laugh
When my greatest moments
Werent stifled by inadequacy

it says so much to me. well your whole poem does. n the last one i read it doesn't sucks. it was amazing n this one was awesome. i just love it. keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy