by Dacey Flame
Awesome rhyming. The rhythm was perfect- and thats my favorite thing to criticize =D. The storys real easy to understand and your so good at love poems. I envy you. Very much. |
by Cindy
So sad yet so well written. Your pain comes through in your words. Excellent! |
by Marie
Wow..i love the rhyme scheme.. beautiful rhythm.. love the word choice. |
by geeeeee
"Its not easy bearing the words |
by Woe
God. your poems just take my breath away! another amazing one. 5/5 |
by Sweet lig
Wish someone wrote me like that kind of poetry hehe u really have a great imagery nice expressing ur love to the sky and etc..wonderful work of urs.. just keep on writing all what u feel and im sure u really inspired. love it!5/5 |