Awwwwwwwww. If thats true, its adorable! And you should tell her, nine out of ten girls love when a boys shy and deep.

Comment #5:
Wow! Great job! This is truly beautiful! And it really shows the confusion you feel while being so sure of something. Great job and congrats again! :)
~Midnight Sun

I like this poem!!!! i can really relate to it. excellent!

Bryan,
This poem is beautiful. The emotion here pulls at your heart! Excellent

Excellent poem, great flow good wording and it was a very heartfelt poem ,great job, glad to see a s.c person doing good, keep up the good work, your friend Tracy5/5

I loved this poem!!...so true...i think we all feel that way sometimes in our life...if only sometimes it was true that the other person wuld love u back aswell!
keep it up 5/5

bree x

I realize you write a lot about love, or things related to love. though most times I think many of the poems to be quite similar, you are very able to keep variaty in your work. very good! ;)
Yet again, I think that you have written a very good poem, it is not my favorite of yours, but defenatly one of them.
The more I read your work, the higher I think of it. I don't understand why this got less comments than some other pieces you wrote.
The poem here, was easy to read (that is to say had a good flow) and overall very well written.

sincerely,
~* natsha *~