Like Red On A Rose(Triple Tetractys)

by Bryan   Dec 12, 2006


Her
luring
beauty is
like red on a
rose, beauty from her head to her toes. My
love pours out like that of a Mid-Summer's
Eve, beauty like
hers cannot
leave. Theres
no
love
than can
ever be
compared, to the
Red On A Rose that I will always share.

this is a style that consist of 5 lines, syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10
double is 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1
triple is 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10
and so on...

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...this is one of my favourites by you, I thought it was beautifully written, and the imagery used was excellent.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Yet another great poem from you Bryan. I liked it. I advise that you put, "Triple Tetracty" in your title instead of just, "Tetractys" that way others know what to expect and look for. Other than that it was very good. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

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