Very nice poem! Aw its so cute! keep it up!

Awwwww another sweet poem!!! i love it! i love it! i love it!!! i really enjoyed reading this one...good job.

Oh, young love can be so sad. If this was inspired by your own life events, I would like to tell you that there are a million girls out there who would love such an outgoing and talented young man!

Bryan,
This is a beautiful poem. Like so many you write. So full of love. You are a very talented young man. Take it from a old lady like me. You one day will have someone to love you like you deserve to be loved. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

Wow this is really good so far..you should definetly finish it!=] oh this is juss suggestion but maybe it would be more "proper" if you capitalized the beginning of the line on every line!=)

AWWW! i liked this poem alot great work

LET IT CUM FROM YO HEART. AND SO FAR IT'S GREAT. I CRIED WHEN I READ IT SERIOUSLY.