IM NOT LISTENING

by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~   Dec 12, 2006


All of my life,
Ive listened to you,
And when i needed to talk,
I thought you'd listen too,

But instead of doing that,
You just tell me what to do,
Never listen to a word i say,
Or help me to get through,

I try to give you advice,
Where advice is due,
But you don't even listen to that,
You just leave me feeling blue,

So don't waste your time,
On talking to me today,
because I'M NOT LISTENING,
to another word you say.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem!!!! i feel the same way right now...love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    The flow of the last stanza didn't seem to fit in with the rest. Keep up the good work though. *4/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Great Job! This poem is almost hateful.. It was great.. I deffinitally love your last stanza. The only problems i found was:

    Ive listened to you, **I've
    And when i needed to talk, ** I
    Never listen to a word i say, ** I

    Other than that IT WAS AMAZING!

    5/5

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