Great Job! This poem is almost hateful.. It was great.. I deffinitally love your last stanza. The only problems i found was:

Ive listened to you, **I've
And when i needed to talk, ** I
Never listen to a word i say, ** I

Other than that IT WAS AMAZING!

5/5

The flow of the last stanza didn't seem to fit in with the rest. Keep up the good work though. *4/5*

Alyson

Excellent poem!!!! i feel the same way right now...love it!