A great poem but so sad,
yet you have done a great job, keep it up and a 5/5 from me.

This is somewhat good. I liked how you wrote this. But it just seems like you were trying to put things together to make it sound good. A few of my friends read this just a few minutes ago and they say the same thing.

Very sad..good poem! i love it.

Its a good poem and if this is really how you feel then i know how that is because i can feel it too