Hmm... angry poem! well written though, nice rhyming!
Love steph

Keep up the good work 5/5

This was great! I'm definitally adding you to my favorites. I love your last two stanzas the best!

Problems:
you wont stop, **won't

and your structure... capitalize each letter in the beginning of each line.

But there's one thing,
That will make you frown,
You may not know,
But what goes up, must come down!

See?

Other than that... your rhyming was amazing and your flow and vocab were too. GREAT JOB!

5/5

It's so true, this poem was well written and flowed nicely, excellent job 5/5 for sure

I really like this poem. It's got a nice rhythm and flow to it. It's something that I'm sure many people can relate to. Great job on this! 5/5

This poem expresses the gravity of the reality catches up us all it is true love that makes our word circle the light. I love the way you put it

There wasn't really a flow to this one. None of the sylables(sp?) seemed to match up. *4/5*

Alyson

This is a perfect poem which s written greatly. keep up the great work, your poems are great and you are really talanted. a 5/5 from me.

I really loved this title and it fits your poem really well. You showed a lot of emotion in it and it was a great read for me. 5/5

Thats a lovely poem!!! the ryming was real preeeeeeetyfulls!!!! :) Kind of angry though, but still nice!!!!! :)oxoxoxoxoxo

+.+ Even tho it was like a sad/angry poem the ending still made me smile! And thanxs for commenting on my poem and agreeing with me!! I love our environment, but it's getting stuffed up +.+

Hmm that was a good poem. Could of been better. 4/5 keep it up.

I like this poem, the title itself grabs your attention, i also like the honesty and truth in this poem. Good job! 5/5

Very agressive poem!! excellent job!! 5/5

This was a great poem, very true also but i don't see where this poem can be sad or anything. It should be in the life catagory[sorry if i spelt that wrong] but besides all that this was a great poem.

keep it up. keep on writing. also thanks for the comment on my poem means alot to me. love always and forever.

Very agressive poem keep it up. keep on writing i liked it but do agree with the others its not sad its great and deserves to be posted some where other than sad poems.

I like it !!!!!!!!!!!! it is just like tells the facts or what ever