Very nicely done keep it up i liked the begining stanza the most 5/5

You are a very talanted writter!
Hope that you keep on writing your poems because they are very good!
Keep on writing!

This was an amazing poem, the words were excellent and it flowed great. It's so true that everything in our lives when were young is so easy, and we never struggle, but when we grow up and those days are left behind, life is sometimes hard to take. amazing poem 5/5

Wow, I can relate to this poem SO much. 'cept the only difference is that I have brown hair and green eyes. lol But wow, this poem took my breath away. I don't know what you did to make it so beautiful; whether it was the words or the style or something else. It was just amazing and it reminded me of my own life so much. Great work, 5/5 girl...but you deserve more

This was amazing. your use of imagery was lovely and the poem flowed well together. I liked your transition from the past to the present. written beautifully 5/5

This is just fantastic. Surely you are a very good poet. Really enjoyed reading this.

God i think you read my mind! i've always thought that (well minus the razor blades). beautifully written poem, wonderful job 5/5

Sad poem. Good imagery. Nice job.

Nice poem, didnt really get it when i read the title, but i get it now!!!! well done...
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Hmm r u the steph thats on my msn...the one that used to have p-a-q acc called never trust again...i could swear its u...

:P cya

P.S good poem btw