Very nice i like it but i sensed alil bit of the flow was off in the middle might just be me but it was still from the heart and well written keep it up 5/5

I must say it's a nicely written poem. Yes, it doesn't flow very well but over all it's a good poem.

Thanks for reading my poems, I liked this one

This one was also good. I love that way that you wrote it and the way that you told what each thing did. *5/5*

Alyson

I really enjoy this. it's short, but it has a nice flow to it. I love the way you ended it, how it kind of clashes with what you were talking about in the beginning. great poem. 5/5

I really want to know what lavender smells like!! A lot of girls like it! Lol, this was a good poem, I think if I knew the scent of lavender, it would have more of an effect on me. It was great though, the imagery and everything. Tickled my senses very nicely.

I'm sorry, I just had to say something.

Poetry is not based on the length of lines or the length of the poem. It is based on the contents of the poem, and if you read it, then you would understand it. People don't look at the size of something to judge it. They read it. If you don't like reading long poems, then don't read them. I appreciate the suggestion, but it was not necessary.

Well i think it is very good!!! 5/5!!!

Before I read the comment you left at the bottom.. I was going to comment on what a great way to write a poem. I loved the emotion. Nice work!

It's nice! it reminds me of Kelis's Have a nice day, from her new album, Kelis was Here. I like it alot.

I loved it!! It like painted a beautiful image in my head! Great poems! Keep writing and I will keep reading!! 5/5

~Shae

Omg that was wonderful. the imagery was so vivid, that I had a clear picture in my head. 5/5

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Its great one , but i have to say that what about write it in lines i think it will be better but still great