by LadyPearl Dec 12, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Spread arms and fly, |
You have wrote with a clear and precise form. As I read it, it was like a piece of art coming into focus. Could imagine everything as you wet the pages with this beautiful piece. Well versed and the flow was great. |
Wow....im afraid that's all i can say...this is good 4.7/5 |
by Cindy
Very good writing! You made the sand take on a life of it's own! Excellent job! |
by Bryan
Very good, loved it, 5/5!!! keep it up!!! |
by x.Athame.x
Wow, a beautiful write. Very, very nice. 5 of 5. |