This piece is also absolutely ah`mazing, like the one I just read before . Nature poems don`t normally appeal to me, but this is just beautifully penned that I can`t help but like it . Just very well done . Yur a beautiful writer(:
..__MiNDYY

Oh -- If you CAN comment on 'Left Broken' please do so . I would appreciate it, but if you can`t, it`s okay anyways(: I`m just glad that you took the time to read it .

Wow, a beautiful write. Very, very nice. 5 of 5.

Very good, loved it, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Very good writing! You made the sand take on a life of it's own! Excellent job!

Wow....im afraid that's all i can say...this is good 4.7/5

You have wrote with a clear and precise form. As I read it, it was like a piece of art coming into focus. Could imagine everything as you wet the pages with this beautiful piece. Well versed and the flow was great.

Jeannie