It's so well written poem. I'm really impressed. You are really talented.

Wonderful write. I really like your poems, you have a lot of talent. The flow was good as well as the structure. However, I don't know why you used,
"----" in that one line, you don't need it. Great Job overall.

Peace, Joe

Fantastic.
You portray your emotions so very well in this one. As a writer, you have a way of writing deeper emotions than some and it shows up in your poems which to me makes them even more amazing.
You had a wonderful flow and excellent vocabulary.
Though I agree I don't know why you have the "----" in there?? I don't know, maybe it's me.
Wonderful job overall, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Another great write. Glad you entered my Christmas Contest. I've just been introduced to a poet who's writing I relate to.

Loved the imagery in this one. Broken Roses and Wandering Bards. Wonderful.

Jeannie