Cupids aim.

by Freddie   Dec 12, 2006


Thinking of you makes the flowers bloom

As winters end comes all to soon

Missing you makes a fairy die

As another angel starts to cry

Loving you creates a baby star

and destroys fossil fuels in a motor car

Seeing you makes my legs go weak

it makes me stutter, i can bairly speak

and just listening to you as you say my name

well it must really help with cupids aim.

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  • 17 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Thanx 4 the comment people usually dont and i really luv ur writing u can tell its coming from somewhere

  • 18 years ago

    by melly xx

    That was such a cute poem
    rhyming had an excellent flow, wasn't forced. lovely! it made me feel warm inside! =)
    5;5

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "Thinking of you makes the flowers bloom
    As winters end comes all to soon"

    Aww, these words are beautiful! I loved it!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "Missing you makes a fairy die
    As another angel starts to cry"

    Some beautiful words in this poem
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

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