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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I think it's excellent! It's so my fave poem of yours!!
    The poor tree, you had a brilliant opening... "They're not allowed to touch"
    It made me laugh, lol.
    I'm going to go home now, look at my tree and comment the angel and see what happens!! lmao
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tite

    Nice job, I really like this poem. Good rhyming too. 5/5.

    Stay Playa,
    SC

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was really cute and very funny! Great job on the writing! I wish I could write ones to make people laugh!

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    For this being random, its pretty good!
    5/5
    xoxo-am

  • 17 years ago

    by andrea

    Enlightening.Well done. 5/5