Holy cow Great job... 1st time c'in a paradelle poem n what a topic... i thought it was perfect i acually seen u chillin on a bench wid a lampost not 2 far away lookin at the town..wile iz snowin of cours, but almost sparkely snow ...great job on workin the topic.. ur poem was amazin... very exelent GREAT JOB
5/5 nice job
PEace
Anthony
P.S i bet u cant tell i really liked this one :P

Man!! ur like tha poem master!! teach me, teach me!! oh wise master! lol!! much love gem!

Wow. It is amazing how talented you are at such a young age. You should be very proud of yourself. Excellent work!

This is an excellent poem. You are right this is a difficult format to master. However, you pulled it off with flying colors. You are the only poet in my favorites section. it is because of poems like these that make you stay there.

I don't know how to thank you all.
You're all amazing poets and to hear you like my work just makes me feel so happy.
Thanks for cheering me up everyone =)
*Gem*

That was SO beautiful. And please read that with as much enthusiasm as I would being saying it with because it definately deserves it. You said it was hard to write but when you read it it just flows wonderfully. Great job once again! And congrats on placing! :)
~Midnight Sun

This is AWESOME, i really like formed poetry and i have to admit to never hearing of this one, It flows really well and under the constraint of the form itself i imagine that when trying to execute it it is not an easy thing to do.

Great job, i'm might even try one myself at some point!

Ben

Beautiful x

Beautiful poem.