Comments : My dragons

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    That was a very unique poem!
    =-)
    Good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    There are some grammatical errors, but good poem. Maybe you should use more detail than just 'big' and 'small,' but still a dreamy impression. You could take this poem further, but it's still fine

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Not bad I enjoyed it dragons. I love dragons.