Great job. Its short, sad, and to the point. And true in a way. awesome job. keep it up!

*shakes fist* dammit, you're really good. I like the concept of this one. It's very true.
Thanks for the comment on my poem ^^

This is great, you really show inner feelings, Well done

Very well written poem, although an area i tend to stay away from when i write.
Tim

This poem is really good, it's very well written and it's sometimes how i feel. You have a talent, Keep it up =D
Thanks for the comment!
Love xo

Omg this is my fav so far !! i love it so much , that i was wondering if i could read it in my english class??? ofcourse the author *you* would be mentioned !

waiting for a reply thx
-xxxxx-

Ok thx !!! trust me ur name is gnna be mentioned wid a big smile on my face , it`s such a gd poem i`ll be honoured just to read it ! (K)

This poem out there. i love it.

I can relate to this poem .. i love it.

HEY you left a comment on my poem im new here so i only 1 poem for now but i have loads in a file but anyway your poem is amazing the way you explained its really good keep it up ill keep checkin to see if u have more poems cuz i like them they really ggood

Wow! I think this is a great poem, powerful. Thank you for my comments I really appreciate them! you are an excellent poet yourself!!

sweet_rebellion

Hey I can so relate to this poem. It is so true.
~Linzii

Wow this is another amazing poem. do you mind if i mention you in my profile. you are one of my fav. poets, i want everyone to know.

Just a word:Wow...

Oh wow...I absolutely loved this!
So strong, and heaps of emotion.
I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked very well together, and I enjoyed the wording and imagery muchly.
A pleasure to read.

Marvelous!! really quite maginifecent such an enjoyable read...this was perfectly strong with loads of emotion. very bold and i just loved it. :] thanks for the comment by the way.

That is so true. My favorite part is the end. We should talk sometime i have a feeling we would get along.

That was really good! You are really good at getting a certain feeling across and I felt all the emotions. Welcome to my faves!

Astryd

Nice poem!

(A laugh,
Is like a blanket of lies) i've seen this done in some discussions......well done