I dont know what to say, that hasnt already been written. you're good, more than good, and you know it. if you dont, you should. i cant believe the way you write, in a way i am jelous! your simply amazing, and you have an imense talent, i hope that you keep writing, i dont know why you wouldnt. this is a simple favorite of mine that you have written. and thank you for your comment recently, it really meant a lot. i never really know what to write, but when something comes to me, i cant stop. have a wonderful day!

Wow-now that is what i call a poem
girl you have talent.

october xx

Wow. One of your best, I must say. Short but very bittersweet -- puts the truth to many happy things, bringing in reality. I love the similes in this, great figurative language.

5.5
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