Wow. you have some amazing lines in here. "GENTLY YOU TOOK MY HEART
PUNGENTLY YOU STABBED IT HARD" that is deep. its so beautiful. same thing with

"HOW LONG MUST I HOLD MY BROKEN HEART
HOW LONG MUST I PRETEND AS EVERYTHING IS FINE" that describes me in perfect, beautiful words, sewn together in one of the best poems i've ever read. this is incredible work.
"AND NOW AM WHISPERING FAINTLY GOODBYE" that is an absolutely perfect end. the only thing i dislike about thispoem, is the CAPS but its absolutely wonderful work. on a scale of 1 to 10, this is definetly a 13! its amazing work. xo~crissy