This poem i know is amazing. I hope she has seen your poem its amazing. I can tell you love her so much and i know that by the way you put everything in words that she means a lot to you. If you haven't shared this poem with her you really need to do so.
Keep up the good work

I like perspective poems but i find it so hard to do it for people that i know because although i know them well i'm always so scared i'll mess it up.
You did an excellent job though =)
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Hey Gurl you did a very good job on dat poem! Keep up tha good work!

Peace Out!\

Jeck

This is well written good job!

I thought it was excellent Im only good at rhymin with my poems I cant do something like this i love how u put it in his prospective its great 5/5

Wow i luv this, thank u so much 4 ur comments they mean alot and i still dn't kno wat i'm do'n on this site i'm always open 4 suggestions! thanx again

Did your b/f write this or r u writong it n his perspective, still luv it tho