I loved your 'chorus'. You did an amazing job on this one. For this one it was slow and almost country sounding in my head, a guy singing this time. I don't understand people not giving you a perfect 5/5. I think you really deserve more. Amazing Lyrics.

5/5

Amazing lyrics, you should really get it sung and recorded. Awesome job. *5/5

Great lyrics would love to hear them to music! Good job!

Chiklets and choklates.hoe

This poem was amazing. 5/5