Aww, this is a beautifullly written. I could almost here music in the background when i was reading it. Something like a slow rock song. I chick singing. I really loved it! I loved your last stanza the best!

Excellent!

5/5

That was the cutest lyrics! such a sad song, i would be interested to hear it, maybe one day i'll hear it on the radio as a famous song! lol, no it was really good, nice job 5/5

I loved this.
I thought it was really sad, and touching.
My favourite part was the last part.
I think you did a wonderful job.