Grey Moon Skies (paradelle)

by *Charisma*   Dec 12, 2006


(for a contest, and very hard!!!)

Rain pouring down on me
Rain pouring down on me
Calming my restless thoughts
Calming my restless thoughts
Restless thoughts pouring on
My rain calming me down

Thunder shakes the damp ground
Thunder shakes the damp ground
Lightning brightens grey skies
Lightning brightens grey skies
Lightning brightens thunder
Ground shakes the damp grey skies

Winds cool the darkened moon
Winds cool the darkened moon
Forest speaks and rustles
Forest speaks and rustles
Darkened forest rustles
And the cool moon winds speak

Darkened lightning brightens
Thunder speaks calming thoughts
Cool rain rustles the ground
My restless forest shakes
The grey moon skies and winds
Pouring damp down on me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! I can not do all the kinds of poems there are! Excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Excellent job. I want to write one someday....too much thinking for me right now. But you did amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Hehe, i can read your paradelle because i'm only one out of five judges and i have to say for someone who was worried about writing one, you did an excellent job!
    Fab =)
    5/5
    *Gem*