by David Marshall Dec 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Alone in this world, I'm afraid to show my face. |
Wow. Such pain in every word, so expressive and heart breaking, well written, just like all your others, very strong. :) |
by Whisper
Aww. I'm gonna cry. Don't die! You're an amazing writer, David. This poem is no exception. I loved it. |
I love this poem. i like the words you used and the way you used them. your a great writer. keep it up. |
by Jessica
This is a good poem. u really expressed your feelings and i think you would make a wonderful writer. |