This is a good poem. u really expressed your feelings and i think you would make a wonderful writer.

I love this poem. i like the words you used and the way you used them. your a great writer. keep it up.
5/5

Aww. I'm gonna cry. Don't die! You're an amazing writer, David. This poem is no exception. I loved it.

~Casey J.

Wow. Such pain in every word, so expressive and heart breaking, well written, just like all your others, very strong. :)