My Last Breath

by Synh   Dec 12, 2006


Feels only like yesterday you were smiling at me
Doing nothing but singing of sweet dreams
Just being the perfect person, my only friend
I never dreamed I'd never see you again
Never imagined I'd get that call
The call that destroyed it all
When she said her son had died
All I could do was lay down and cry
Now I've only pictures of you to see
I wish you knew what you mean to me
Every night to the Lord I pray
That when in heaven, I'll be able to say
What you mean to me my friend
My soul will love you to the end
You were there for me through and through
And for that, I'll forever adore you
Now, as I begin to breathe my last breath
I dream of my happiness only in death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Great poem! well penned! and.. sorry for your loss TC :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    That was so sad...yet so beautfully written.
    I thought the last line had huge impact and was really powerful.
    I enjoyed the flow, and I thought the imagery used was great.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    That was very well written. I loved the emotion and the heart. You expressed yourself very well throughout this piece. Nice work. 4.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very sad indeed. If it's true, I'm sorry for your loss.

    "I never dreamed I'd never see you again
    Never imagined I'd get that call" -- I don't like the repitition of 'never' here. You use it three times in the space of two lines, which knows the gradual and easy flow of the poem. However, apart from this, it was very well written. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    It was a great poem, well writen and full of emotion.

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