by BrokenREALiTy Dec 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
First we were strangers, |
by Michelle
That was very touching and i loved the ryhme scheme.. is this true? |
Omg this was such a sad but beautiful poem im literally in tears!! |
by amoxi
Amazing i had tears in my eyes it was very beautiful and im sorry the loss that you had |
WOW!!! absolutely AMAZING! I loved the way it was written -- so originally. You kept me hooked. Great job! |
This poem really really touched me. the emotion was there and real and oh god it made me feel so sad. I really did love it. The words used were great and the rhymeing was just wow. It was just so heartbreaking.. I hope this didnt happen and if it did i really do hope your allright. if you ever need to talk i am hear k? It was quite long yet i was engaged to read more and more, from the first couple of stanza's you yould of never of guessed the end. Keep writing and i hope your ok! xx |