Wow. I'm in tears right now and I don't even know what to say. I love how you wrote this, it was so heartfelt...like I could've actually been there. And I've watched someone die of cancer just recently and that was all I could think about when I was reading this. Anyways, excellent write. Never stop writing!! All the best and take care.

`Poetess

Soo...i'm pretty much in tears right now. I cant think of anything i'd change and i love how you wrote it, true story or not. you're an amazing writer and i look forward to reading more of your stuff. keep that pen moving!

WoW, i really really thought that this was an excellent poem that u written, also it had lost of emotion, keep up the work i give u a 5/5

OMG! This poem wants to make me cry. :( I really hope this didnt happen! I feel so sad. I think the only thing that you can fix is your first stanza:

First we were strangers,
Meeting online.
Living our lives with happiness;
Everything was just fine.

The living our lives with happiness, is just a little too long... maybe living our happy lives. I don't know...

THIS POEM WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

5/5!

Verrrrrrrrrrry long but omg wow def worth the readin wit a comment lol!! good job!!

Extremly long but very good mindy, flows great, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Oh..my..god..

I'm in tears right now also, It reminds me of my friend online , Omg, you did an excellent job on this poem!! Keep up the good work!!

Much love,
Angel

I am crying! No tearing up, I am crying. Lol.
That was so terribly sad, I hope it's not true. I can tell that you put so many emotions into this one hun. Great job on that. You had a perfect flow and a wonderful vocabulary. 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Oh my god, I am practically in tears, and that is unusual for me. I generally don't care for sad poems, they seem kind of fake, but this one was amazing. An absolutely slendid, deeply emotional and breathtakingly sad write. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5

I really liked this. it was sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. You really have captured emotions very well. 5/5

AWwwww. That's soo sad! Left me in tears. It's sooooo sad. Keep it up girl!
I love your poems. God Bless 5/5

~*Tay*~

Totally worth reading!

That was so sweet and is written in a way that you feel you are there. The flow was nice and strong. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Oh wow..hunny...
This was so heartbreaking.
Yet such a pleasure to read.
I think you did a wonderful job on such a sad topic.

Wow.....this is gorgous and wondefully written!
the emotion and constant ryhiming is amazing!
5/5
xoxo-am

Oh My Goodness, what a heart braking poem. Brings tears to my eyes. Well writen.

Talk about emotional, im crying here, 10/10 well done!!

Omg Mindy your poem is AMAZING it made me cry.. its really sad but amzingly writen.

I love the way you left a space for the name of the guys lil brother..you are an amzing writer and thank you so much for the comment i will try my best to put in those lil thing that you told me..

much love
Lacey

Damn, that made me cry like a little girl, great job, ive never read a poem that was that strong, perfect flow and rhyming5/5

That actually brought tears to my eyes. I LOVED that. It was beautifully written. I honestly couldn't find a single thing wrong with it. If this is true, I am very, very sorry for the loss you had to endure.

Take care.

Aww... i love it... im guessing this is a true story? i love everything about this! i hope u r ok? i have a friend like that too, and id be devastated if he died in a flash. but at least u got to see ur love before they died...

thank u for writing this; you depict strong emotion!

plz comment on "a thousand things went right today" if you can...

thanks,

rain