Reminiscence

by LadyPearl   Dec 13, 2006


As winter steals summer
Bitter will it be, knowing you
must go, Llke the fall
of autumn leaves.
The temples remain silent
Closing away their secrets
As a wind, cold and daunting
Scatters the lingering words

Hunger tempts the dawn
Lust and upmost pain, it
Shatters shields you've drawn
Fading along with dreams
White lilies frame your face
Illuminated from the light
I trace your smiling eyes
How happy we must have been

Roses dance along walls
An untouched bed beside
the neglected letters from sea
Scratched on were some dates
Until even those left me forgotten
Wandering fields of mercury
Where I still run to remember
That laughter in my ears

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  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Really well written...
    I like all the details

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    You write with such eloquence and beauty. A depth of passion beyond your years.

    Once again you have trapped me within the lines of your poetry and not released me until the end.

    Great job
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Beautiful poem, great flow, beautifully written... you are an exceptional writer. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I really like the imagery in this one. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I thought that it could have been a little more organized, but other then that it was good. *5/5*

    Alyson