Wow, a long read, but very nice. Made me smile. Great job on it, 5 of 5.

Wow i love it! that poem is absolutely amazing! except that part where you said the bees wanted 2 eat the pollen i think u should maybe change that to nectar cos i don't think bees eat pollen cos thats what fertilises the egg... otherwise absolutely fantastic one of my favourite reads!!

This is great! I am still laughing! Excellent job on this one! 5/5

Fantastic & Very Original.
I keep seeing this imagery flashing through my mind. Quite funny at times. =] Very long but you're right it was worth the read. The flow was great the vocabulary was amazing! =]

I would like to thank you for you honest opinion on my poem. It helps a lot in becoming a better writer and I appreciate (sp?) it a lot. So, thank you! =]

A great write, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Lol...this was great...very original and funny. Great job....full of vivid imagery.5/5

I loved this.
It was original and I also found it quite amusing, particularly the last stanza.
I think you did a very good job on this.

Aww.. that was sooo cute! I liked it! Keep writing . . .
*Just Lisa*