Wow, except for the style being done perfectly, this is a beatiful poem! i love it! wow.

Narc xxx

Beautiful! Your poems are so great! This one made me smile as I read it just picturing a song bird. Great job!

Excellent job on this form. It's a lot longer than the one I did!

Whoa, I really like this! Another fantastic one Bry, really. You are a good writer with all the styled ones.
Just one thing, minor,
line 15:
mind tells me your
should be
mind tells me you're

I mean, it's really no big deal. Great job, once again. easy 5/5! Don't ever stop hun!

Ciao

Comment #10:
I don't know why it doesn't have more comments, I love it! It's not a style usually seen on the site and I like that. Great job, and congrats again on coming in first! :)
~Midnight Sun

I like coming across a style that I have not often read on this site but also the poem itself is very unique!
This one defenatly deserves a 5/5. you really get the idea you are there, and can picture the songbird singing!
I really really liked it!
keep on writing, you're very talented!

~* Natasha *~