Hate (Clarity Pyramid)

by Bryan   Dec 13, 2006


HATE,
Caring,
Jealousy,

Hate you for leaving,
Caring for you always,
Jealous for you loving him.

"In the end it was all for love".

this style consist of 7 lines
3 different sections
syllable count of 1,2,3, then 5,6,7, then 8 for the last but quoted the last line"". Title is the first line.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    This is a great poem Bryan! I forgot how to do these and you did it great! *pssst* where'd ya go? collab.... ;] I miss ya sweetie!

    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by Munequita

    Your poems are good and i like how u describe what they are at the end...

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow You have a way with words. I just do not understand the diffrent forms of poetry. Very good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #4:
    Very nice twist on love. I really enjoyed it. Great job on another pre-structured poem. Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this.
    It was so different and unique, and you managed to get a lot of emotion into such a short poem.
    Well done.

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