I love this.
It was so different and unique, and you managed to get a lot of emotion into such a short poem.
Well done.

Comment #4:
Very nice twist on love. I really enjoyed it. Great job on another pre-structured poem. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Wow You have a way with words. I just do not understand the diffrent forms of poetry. Very good job!

Your poems are good and i like how u describe what they are at the end...

This is a great poem Bryan! I forgot how to do these and you did it great! *pssst* where'd ya go? collab.... ;] I miss ya sweetie!

Ciao