Serenity (Pleades)

by Bryan   Dec 13, 2006


Sometimes I wonder why I try
So hard to hang on
Somethings got to change
Serenity is gone
Sanity has left me
Scared of losing you
Stop this, you know my love is true.

Pleades is a style that consists of 7 lines all lines begin in the same letter as the title. Title is only one word.

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natasha

    Wow! this is defenatly my favorite (or one of them, you have many good poems ;) ) I like the way in every single poem you use different words, very good vocab.
    best piece I think in this poem is: stop this, you know my love is true.

    thank you for all the great poetry, I will defenatly be back to read more.

    sincerely,
    ~* Natasha *~

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Dang sorry... stupid computer... I meant to say Keep it up babe... but it sent it twice and it was wrong x.x lol
    ;]

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Hey You! I had to search for a poem on your featured list that I haven't commented. I liked this one, as with all your other ones. :) I wish you would come back to the club! Pwetty Pwease... ;) Anyway, hope that writer's block ends, because I would love to read some new poems! =] Keep is up babe!
    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Hey You! I had to search for a poem on your featured list that I haven't commented. I liked this one, as with all your other ones. :) I wish you would come back to the club! Pwetty Pwease... ;) Anyway, hope that writer's block ends, because I would love to read some new poems! =] Keep is up babe!
    Ciao

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Marvelous! I am impressed at how you can write with so much emotion within the confines of the structure you have choosen. Good work