I never heard of this style before, but i like it good job

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You did really good on this...I haven't heard of this style either but this was very good. I enjoyed it!
~Midnight Sun

I am not a expery in poetry, but I know when I read something, if I like it and this I liked. Good Job!

Again, great job with the formed poetry!

Wow, a very hard structure to follow..but you mastered it beautifully. I love the emotion. Yeah, I miss ya too...but Doug was driving me crazy, and I have a short temper. Did I get bad-mouthed pretty badly after leaving? That's what I assumed..anyway, 5/5

Aw i feel the same. great touching poem

Marvelous! I am impressed at how you can write with so much emotion within the confines of the structure you have choosen. Good work

Hey You! I had to search for a poem on your featured list that I haven't commented. I liked this one, as with all your other ones. :) I wish you would come back to the club! Pwetty Pwease... ;) Anyway, hope that writer's block ends, because I would love to read some new poems! =] Keep is up babe!
Ciao

Hey You! I had to search for a poem on your featured list that I haven't commented. I liked this one, as with all your other ones. :) I wish you would come back to the club! Pwetty Pwease... ;) Anyway, hope that writer's block ends, because I would love to read some new poems! =] Keep is up babe!
Ciao

Dang sorry... stupid computer... I meant to say Keep it up babe... but it sent it twice and it was wrong x.x lol
;]

Wow! this is defenatly my favorite (or one of them, you have many good poems ;) ) I like the way in every single poem you use different words, very good vocab.
best piece I think in this poem is: stop this, you know my love is true.

thank you for all the great poetry, I will defenatly be back to read more.

sincerely,
~* Natasha *~