Very sweet poem. I liked it a lot. Please never change it. 5/5

This is like an Ode and an acrostic poem. Very nice.

Alright. So I absolutely adored the second line, the "hair like silk, insanity" one. That right there, thats poetic. It was almost perfect, but the line about the angel.. I don't know. Its just that everyone says that and it becomes so cliche, ya know? But its still a good poem. haha

Awwwwwwwwwwww so sweet!!!!!!!!!

"your an angel sent from above"

i love that line!! good job!

Soft lips, when you kiss me,
Hair like silk, insanity.

wow, i like the kind of contrast, well, i think thats wat they call it, since you like it, but it leads to insanity! wow

Narc xxx

A poem lasts forever, you never know who will remember it.
I will remember this one.
It's a beautiful tribute to shelly.

- Natasha

Bryan, Wonderful job on this the words are beautiful! Take Care Cindy

Hey Bryan! Yeah, my inspiration was on the low side and I've been swamped with a lot of tests, family stuff etc. Thanks for the comment. This was a very nice poem. I had to go through a few to find one I hadn't commented on yet. =]

~*Ciao*~