I Should Have Said It Before..But Its To Late
by Jerica Robichaud Dec 13, 2006
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As The Truck Runs Into Our Car I See Your Face...You Eyes Are Closed As I start To Cry I See Your Eyes Close...Then I Hear Your Last Words I Love U More Then Anything...I cryed Harder And Said I love You To But It Was To Late My Dear Friend James Was Already Gone And I was Still Here I didn\'t Want It To happen This Way I Yell!! Whyy Him He was 17 He Was Sposed To Live Longer I never Got To Say GoodBye Or I Love You More Then Words Could Ever Say.... |
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16 years ago
Im sooo sry about your friend
your poem was very good
wish u all best
good work -
17 years ago
by Lovely Bones
I thought that this prose-poem was full of raw emotion, however to make it easier to read, I'd actually put it in poem structure (with stanzas) and punctuation. You're thoughts/story would then be so much more effective. But I'm sorry for your loss. Hopefully you will see him again someday :)
Take Care and God Bless,
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17 years ago
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