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I thought that this prose-poem was full of raw emotion, however to make it easier to read, I'd actually put it in poem structure (with stanzas) and punctuation. You're thoughts/story would then be so much more effective. But I'm sorry for your loss. Hopefully you will see him again someday :)

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Im sooo sry about your friend
your poem was very good
wish u all best
good work