I love Odes. I think they are one of the best kinds of poems.

I like love poems and I enjoyed this one.
Just a few things though.

"Absolute perfection
I see in your eyes,
as you sleep
my heart forever cries."

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I think the forever makes it a few syllables too long. Maybe it can be as you sleep, my heart it cries. I don't know its up to you but it kind of ruined the flow for me which was going really well.

"Beautifully mastered
how you stole my heart"

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love those lines, they are really sweet and meaningful.

"Without you here
I cant help but weep
so I sit here and pray
where you sleep"

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WOW so powerful. Reminds me of a situation I went through and I love it when poems remind you of memories or make you think about things. Brilliant work.

Beautiful ending, wrapping up a great sweet poem.

well done
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