Now I Die (Double Malisus)

by Bryan   Dec 13, 2006


Heart,
torn apart.
By you,
you know that its true.
Sweet memories,
are all that's left of me.
But I'll never let go,
on all I know.
But all of my pain,
remains.
So now I,
die.

Malisus is a style that has one stanza with six lines. The first line has 1 syllable. The second has 3. The third has 2. The forth has 5. The fifth has 4. The sixth has 6. The rhyme scheme is "aabbcc"

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan,
    Great job on this poem. It was a joy to read. I understand this is a hard form to pull off. You seemed to do it perfect. Excellent! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow. This was really good! You did an amazing job on the layout.. I've never heard of this type of poem, but i'm sure it was pretty hard to do. But you did a great job at it.

    you know that its true. [it's]

    Good job. Keep it up

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #3:

    Again, I loved the title...once again you did such a great job. There really is SO much talent here. Great job! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Bryan this one is absolutely perfect! I love the way you pulled off this style....very difficult, but it has great flow and profound meaning. A joy to read!

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    I love this, it has a good tension, its very well written, good job!

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