Well written...i liked it!
~Elissa

Wow I love the Idea and the words you use to describe what you feel great job 5/5

My tears are turning
into time,
pouring from my eyes
into rhymes.

I love that . This poem was nicely written(: The flow was good and I liked the choice of words .
..__MiNDYY

This poem was excellent and all to true,the flow was great and your word usage was perfect, nice job 5/5

This poem has great rhythm, and reflect well the pain of a broken heart

Great job. You seem to be getting better and better now. It's smoother and has more emotions.

Whoa... This poem is awesome. :) Way better than any of my love ones. You had a great beat in this. I didn't feel like I was skipping around. Your rhyming helped the poem move more smoothly. Great Job!

I love this part:
I can can still feel,
this pain is constant
and I know its real.
No matter what I do
I'm still filled with tears,
emotions unleashed
the worst of my fears.

The tears are taking
time away from me,
and this pain will last
for the rest of eternity.

The whole poem was amazing!

Excellent.

5/5

This is awesome and i think this is very interesting good job and thx for the comment

keenan

NICE.....
It has a magical way to it

Excellent poem....good flow, rhyme throughout....love the title. 5/5

Wow this poem is really good
I love the emotion you gave it
Good job

O wow!!!! this poem was juz about the greatest poem tht i've EVR read!!! i LOVE IT!!!!!

What A Poem!!! Great job! I really really liked this one. It was filled with emotion and I know EXACTLY how you feel... just went through that myself actually. Great job, great job great job!!!

♥Ciao

Comment #2:

WOW! That was just amazing and I LOVED the title. I really love it when the title draws you in and then the poem just steals the show...great job!
~Midnight Sun

I really really loved this. It was just amazing! WOW. I absolutley LOVED the title.. Caught me right away! One thing:

I can can still feel,
[Idk if you meant to put two 'can's but.. It kinda through me off]

Other than that.. Awesome job. KEEP IT UP!

Bri.x

I like this poem alot as well, there s something about your poems that grab your readers attention and they want to keep reading them, you are and amazing writer.

I think this is wonderful! 5/5