I think it sounds excellent, any guy lucky enough to recieve a poem such as this by his girlfriend is very blessed indeed!

"Now that i have finally found someone like you, as perfect, kind, caring, and as sweet as you are, I dont intend on letting you go or making any mistakes"

I especially loved that line... the whole poem was so beautiful, a wonderful way of showing your love..
Well done, fantastic poem
5/5
*Gem*