by Heather Dec 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Nothing is as easy as it used to be. |
by Tom Swart
I liked your poem - nice and sweet... May love treat you kindly. |
by Allison
That was really sweet! Keep up the good work.*5/5* |
It almost sounds like a hate poem... The only thing I can think of to improve is structure. Capitalize each letter in the beginning of a new line. Example: |