Comments : All Because Of You

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    It almost sounds like a hate poem... The only thing I can think of to improve is structure. Capitalize each letter in the beginning of a new line. Example:

    Hearing your voice and knowing even without
    All the answers, everything will be alright.
    Everything is so complicated and
    Nothing is as easy as it used to be.
    But all that fades to nothing.
    All because of you.

    Other than that, it was beautifully written.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    That was really sweet! Keep up the good work.*5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I liked your poem - nice and sweet... May love treat you kindly.